Words That Move Mountains

The simple formula for hooks that grab attention instantly

Welcome back to Viral Examples.

Today (in 2 mins or less) we're diving into how to create hooks so powerful they do 80% of your selling with just 20% of your words.

Words That Move Mountains

"Your first sentence costs $1,000. Each word after that is worth $1."

That's the brutal math of attention online. 

The difference between viral creators and everyone else isn't talent, but understanding that opening hooks follow a precise formula.

The 3-Part 80/20 Hook Formula:

1/ Create immediate tension 

Start with a pattern interrupt - something that challenges assumptions or creates cognitive dissonance:

  • "The best hooks never try to sell"

  • "Most email advice actually destroys opens"

  • "Your expertise is killing your content"

The key is making readers pause and think: "Wait, that can't be right... can it?"

2/ Promise specific value 

Follow tension with a clear payoff. What will they gain by continuing? Be concrete:

  • "3 frameworks that bypass skepticism"

  • "The template that doubles response rates"

  • "A 30-second fix for dead engagement"

Don't promise vague outcomes like "grow your audience" - promise the exact tool they'll receive.

3/ Qualify your ideal reader 

The strongest hooks filter as much as they attract. Signal who should pay attention:

  • "For founders tired of ghosted follow-ups"

  • "What elite creators never share publicly"

  • "The approach only profitable newsletters use"

This creates an in-group effect that makes the right people feel personally addressed.

The magic happens when you combine all three elements in 8 words or less. Your hook should create tension, promise value, and qualify your reader - all before they've finished their scroll.

Remember: The best hooks don't sell the content. They make it impossible not to read it.

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